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Tuesday, April 19, 2011

Hell Breaking Loose Right on Schedule

Last night worked on the kitchen scene some more and really like it now. I didn't forsee it going the way it went but it focused on Eugenie's deterioration and how her husband, Gilbert, perceives it. Also showed how loyal Cassandra, the cook, is to Julian and how Julian and Walter conspire to repress Charlotte in order to -- as they perceive it -- protect her. (Charlotte is sister to Julian & Gilbert; wife to Walter). The kitchen scene showed deterioration going on in the background -- Anika remembering sick people in the shops on her morning rounds, increased funerals, and a long Obits column in the paper. I covered a lot of ground in 2 pages. Really pleased with that.

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